"In the pursuit of virtue, don't be afraid to overtake your teacher."
"Young people should not be taken lightly. How do you know that they will not one day be better than you are now?"

--Confucius

"True poets are only the interpreters of the Gods."

-- Socrates

You laugh because I'm different, I laugh because you're the same.


Sunday, October 23, 2011

Colored

Author's Note:
This is a poem that I wrote last year, but didn't like it.  So I edited it and hear it is.  I am focusing on word choice. 

Colored water in the oceans
Colored air up in the skies
Colored gel all in your hair
Colored topping on your pies

Colored soap globbed on some fingers
Colored lotion on someone's hands
Colored paint up on a canvas
Colored bottles in the sand

Colored tubes under our houses
Colored sprinkles on cupcakes
Colored wished in hearts
Colored money at stake

Colored hair on children
Colored books in a house
Colored buildings on streets
Colored cats and a mouse

Colored roofs all up top
Colored doors on the side
Colored pants on your legs
Colored skates that can glide

Colored answers to questions
Colored boxes in yards
Colored pencils in cases
Colored planes to go far

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