S-kI-In—G

Author’s Note:

I wrote this after reading Mai’s Blog.  I am trying to write in the style of E.E. Cumming’s r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r.   I was not sure originally what the poem was supposed to be, but you really have to almost look at the words instead of reading them.  I WANT COMMENTS.

S-kI-iN—G

                  

                                                          g       

                                                n

                                      i

                             d

i

          l                  (down)

s

t(hills)he

      u        n        n

t        r        I        g        top

                                       -

and                                 --

                                      -----

                                   -----------         

                                    -----

then                                -

                                  bottom

Slope

Mov(down the) ing

To

                                                h

                                    c

                        a

            e

r

t(bottom)he o(the)f

                        N                                 L                      n

I                                   C                                 I                                   e