r-m-e-t-e-l-o-w-a-n

Author's Note:
This is my second attempt at writing a poem similar to E.E. Cummings r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r.  I still want comments!!!

r-m-e-t-e-l-o-w-a-n

                whole

th(en y(ou dro)p i)t

nowitsbroken

                ETLOWRANME

                                landu)!onpl(a

teThe;)^s

                mA

                     ;sh

W                                            e

                /m                                        f

eedinG                 ,rmetelowa(n

                                                    to

ch(pi)dren(cn)at(ic)a

:watermelon.

E.E. Cummings r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r

   r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r
                      who
  a)s w(e loo)k
  upnowgath
                  PPEGORHRASS
                                        eringint(o-
  aThe):l
             eA
                 !p:
S                                                         a
                          (r
  rIvInG                         .gRrEaPsPhOs)
                                                         to
  rea(be)rran(com)gi(e)ngly
  ,grasshopper;