Author's Note:
This is my passage inspired by a Christmas Break event. It is from the perspective of my sister as she's opening a present from me. The point of this story is to describe what happened and her thoughts as she was opening it. I am focusing on voice. Please leave comments.
Opening that sole, large, multi-colored box; with your name on it. As you unwrap the first layer of paper, you notice that there was another box inside. You unwrap that box, another, another, another, another, another, another, another, and finally get to a small jewelry looking box and the very center. You carefully open this delicate container and you discover a note. This note has one word upon its' page. Your mind thinks that this is some kind of joke since you just spent eleven minutes opening the previous boxes. What did the note say, you ask, and I answer; FAIL.
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